Hi!
I finished your story and honestly, I was very impressed. The expressions, pacing, and drama are so strong that it feels perfect for a comic format. If adapted into a comic or Webtoon, it could attract even more people.
I create Webtoons, comics, and character art. If you’re ever curious about how it might look visually, feel free to reach out to me.
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