C14 Should I stop from here?

Ida stood on the edge of the yacht, the warm sand between her toes and the cool water lapping at her ankles. She watched as Akio, her fiancé, approached her with a playful grin on his face.

"Come on, Ida, let's go for a swim," he said, taking her hand in his.

Ida laughed, feeling a surge of excitement. Akio was always full of energy and adventure, and she loved him for it