The story itself is pretty decent. However, the typos, spelling errors, etc. are extremely distracting and make the story feel very amateur and childish. At least run the chapters through Grammerly or something. Also, the word is «sigh» NOT «sight.»
The story itself is pretty decent. However, the typos, spelling errors, etc. are extremely distracting and make the story feel very amateur and childish. At least run the chapters through Grammerly or something.
Also, the word is «sigh» NOT «sight.»