You’d be reading a paragraph, and it goes back and forth from third party perspective to first party perspective. That with mislabeling of genders and random words make it unbearable to read. I couldn’t make it past Chapter 2. I hope an editor steps in and corrects these chapters, because the story itself seems interesting.
You’d be reading a paragraph, and it goes back and forth from third party perspective to first party perspective. That with mislabeling of genders and random words make it unbearable to read. I couldn’t make it past Chapter 2. I hope an editor steps in and corrects these chapters, because the story itself seems interesting.