I can’t follow the story. It keeps going from third party perspective to first party perspective in a single paragraph. That mixed together with wrong genders and random wording… I genuinely can’t follow this story.
I really hope an editor eventually steps in and corrects these chapters, because this is a novel I really wanted to read, but I can’t make it beyond the 2nd chapter
I can’t follow the story. It keeps going from third party perspective to first party perspective in a single paragraph. That mixed together with wrong genders and random wording… I genuinely can’t follow this story.
I really hope an editor eventually steps in and corrects these chapters, because this is a novel I really wanted to read, but I can’t make it beyond the 2nd chapter