Was this even proofread? It’s a little hard to distinguish what’s dialog and what’s regular text, plus the typical instances of referring to characters as the wrong gender and mixing up names. I really think these stories should be screened before getting posted because things like this make it hard to enjoy.
Was this even proofread? It’s a little hard to distinguish what’s dialog and what’s regular text, plus the typical instances of referring to characters as the wrong gender and mixing up names. I really think these stories should be screened before getting posted because things like this make it hard to enjoy.