CEO, Please Behave Yourself
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CEO, Please Behave Yourself
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Good starting but loosing in the end

  • qgb7rm74zcJanuary 22, 2022 8:55 AM

    Starting it’s good, but from middle till the end the story loosing some ideas, jumping from one subject to another, the end it’s positive but can’t understand how did they reach to that point. What happened to evil characters from the story? Did they vanished? At least it’s short and don’t need to spend to much to read it

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  • snilssinApril 5, 2023 8:07 AM

    Thanks for your input.

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