Author set up a fucking epic revenge plot…by having the bad guy kidnap, rape and murder the mc’s sister in front of the Mc and his parents.. and he is working step by step to get stronger to get revenge. Ya can almost taste that sweet revenge.. but then the revenge happens in passing. Some dumb shit like “oh year, while Mc was traveling, he made a quick stop at his home city and killed the bad guy”. The entirety of his revenge summed up and ended in a fucking sentence.
Author set up a fucking epic revenge plot…by having the bad guy kidnap, rape and murder the mc’s sister in front of the Mc and his parents.. and he is working step by step to get stronger to get revenge. Ya can almost taste that sweet revenge.. but then the revenge happens in passing. Some dumb shit like “oh year, while Mc was traveling, he made a quick stop at his home city and killed the bad guy”. The entirety of his revenge summed up and ended in a fucking sentence.