For a very shortly novel, Author seems to be pulling story arcs out from nowhere. A couple of new characters are force crammed in the middle. One was abruptly introduced and spent just about 3-5 paragraphs in the whole story. And that’s it. No resolution of conflict. Seems a shame.
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namokilenjungJuly 25, 2020 2:31 PM
Loved reading this novel… Author great work…
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singhalnikita23August 2, 2020 12:27 PM
Yaa the story is a bit rush. So may be more chapters were added.
For a very shortly novel, Author seems to be pulling story arcs out from nowhere. A couple of new characters are force crammed in the middle. One was abruptly introduced and spent just about 3-5 paragraphs in the whole story. And that’s it. No resolution of conflict. Seems a shame.