Author could probably elaborate more on the characters development. No doubt this story was a good one but it’s lacking the element. For the ending, it could be longer such as the twins or the newborn. Or even xiao bai. And what happen to gong ailin. Such parts can be mention so the story touches all the point.
Author could probably elaborate more on the characters development. No doubt this story was a good one but it’s lacking the element. For the ending, it could be longer such as the twins or the newborn. Or even xiao bai. And what happen to gong ailin. Such parts can be mention so the story touches all the point.