C79 Very Charming

He looked at the draft and saw that it was much better than the one he had given away, but why couldn't he pass it?

"Head Lin... This draft will be changed again, but can you tell me what to do with it? Because this is the best I can do. If you let me take it back and change it again, I won't be able to make much progress. If you can tell me, maybe I'll be able to do it in one go