The stlry is nive and interesting , but there is so much details and pov’s that is too annoying , eavh one talk hos geelings and moves , dear writer some mystery is good and being cool with low profile is better .. The writer is too much sentimemtal i liked the early chapters but the others kept lagging with details,plus the he and she i don’t know which character is talking for there is manyyyy ..
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XenaverraNovember 19, 2021 7:17 PM
Story, nice , his , feelings ** sorry for mistakes in typing , i didn’t pay attention
Hope the story gets better ..
The stlry is nive and interesting , but there is so much details and pov’s that is too annoying , eavh one talk hos geelings and moves , dear writer some mystery is good and being cool with low profile is better .. The writer is too much sentimemtal i liked the early chapters but the others kept lagging with details,plus the he and she i don’t know which character is talking for there is manyyyy ..