I’m giving this one up. There is waaaay too much explanation wedged between conversations and actions. ML will say a few words then a whole chapter of an extremely detailed aside, then the response or action. Way too disjointed.
I’m giving this one up. There is waaaay too much explanation wedged between conversations and actions. ML will say a few words then a whole chapter of an extremely detailed aside, then the response or action. Way too disjointed.