You use the word “metempsychosed” instead of transmigrated - why? You know 99% of your readers are going to have to look up the word, so why are you being so annoying & bothersome. It doesn’t make the readers impressed. Not impressed with the novel either. Stick to good, solid writing instead of tricks.
You use the word “metempsychosed” instead of transmigrated - why? You know 99% of your readers are going to have to look up the word, so why are you being so annoying & bothersome. It doesn’t make the readers impressed. Not impressed with the novel either. Stick to good, solid writing instead of tricks.