Where to even begin this story jumps around too much, though it's still been good

I’ve amateurous authors, one that were just starting out with their first book, even those were better than this jumble mess of a book ending chapter of one thing like the mc going to at house let say for example in city b and waking at another completely different house in city a with completely different people around him and apparently having promised to help so woman solve her arranged marriage problem that was forced on her the very next chapter and