Rebirth: Pastoral’s Little Daughter - Not a good read
TmahoneyMay 18, 2021 4:05 PM
Storyline is cliche but it had some potential, too bad it was poorly written. It’s a combination of poor translation and bad plot/character development so it was hard to follow and confusing to read. Seems like a bunch of random conversations and character thoughts thrown in. Maybe the author was trying to cram a bunch of stuff in since it’s a very short story?
Storyline is cliche but it had some potential, too bad it was poorly written. It’s a combination of poor translation and bad plot/character development so it was hard to follow and confusing to read. Seems like a bunch of random conversations and character thoughts thrown in. Maybe the author was trying to cram a bunch of stuff in since it’s a very short story?