Yes a 15 chapter fight scene. In the first 36 chapters, about 15 of those chapters are dedicated to a super serious fight scene against people much stronger than the mc. Who wants that at the very beginning of a novel? I’m not saying the entire novel sucks, because I had to stop at c36. It may be good in the later chapters. I’m just saying it couldn’t draw me in.
Yes a 15 chapter fight scene. In the first 36 chapters, about 15 of those chapters are dedicated to a super serious fight scene against people much stronger than the mc. Who wants that at the very beginning of a novel? I’m not saying the entire novel sucks, because I had to stop at c36. It may be good in the later chapters. I’m just saying it couldn’t draw me in.