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Super Master
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I'm at c900. Pros and cons of the story so far.

  • ThepoxxedJanuary 2, 2023 3:22 AM

    Pros:

    1. The subplots aren’t too drawn out.
    2. The villains are somewhat weak.
    3. The mc is still overpowered.

    Cons:
    1. That comrade’s sister is barely in the storyline. If all her dialogue is put together, shehas maybe had half a chapter worth of content.

    1. No redemption for any of the villains. They always remain one dimensional.

    2. The villains do not have common sense. So it makes a lot of subplots nonsensical.

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  • KangaApril 11, 2023 7:23 AM

    Thanks for heads up. I just came back from long vacation so havent read for 2-3 mos I think.

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