Pacing, character building (parents/comrades/lovers), world expansion as the MC levels - not bad!
MC’s comrades follow him throughout his journey. Some parts of the plot comes back full circle to the early chapters to provide a fuller story.
I appreciate that the author wraps up the story on a high note and doesn’t milk the story for another thousand chapters.
Pacing, character building (parents/comrades/lovers), world expansion as the MC levels - not bad!
MC’s comrades follow him throughout his journey. Some parts of the plot comes back full circle to the early chapters to provide a fuller story.
I appreciate that the author wraps up the story on a high note and doesn’t milk the story for another thousand chapters.