The story is nice though full of heartaches.
Lots of grammatical errors, but the common errors that make the readers confused much, are the use of he, his, when referring to a woman/female/girl, and using she and her when referring to a man/male/boy.
Note: he, his and him - refer to a man/male/ boy.
Her and she - refer to a woman/female/girl.
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livinanamika68March 14, 2022 3:25 PM
Yes it’s right…… the pain can be really felt through the words
The story is nice though full of heartaches.
Lots of grammatical errors, but the common errors that make the readers confused much, are the use of he, his, when referring to a woman/female/girl, and using she and her when referring to a man/male/boy.
Note: he, his and him - refer to a man/male/ boy.
Her and she - refer to a woman/female/girl.