I must say that the pronoun use, the spelling and sentence structure are atrocious and pathetic. It is set in modern times yet the author has them speaking in the third person and speech patterns that belong in the dark ages not in this time of cellphone and big screen televisions. The only good thing it has going for it is the plot.
I must say that the pronoun use, the spelling and sentence structure are atrocious and pathetic. It is set in modern times yet the author has them speaking in the third person and speech patterns that belong in the dark ages not in this time of cellphone and big screen televisions. The only good thing it has going for it is the plot.