Story is all over the place. Author can never finish a subplot. Right before a subplot is supposed to wrap up, the author just has the Mc get distracted and start a new subplot. The last two hundred chapters are especially brutal to read. Author just threw a bunch of shit against the wall and hoped some of it stuck. He should’ve just had a simple, clear storyline. Instead it was too convoluted.
Story is all over the place. Author can never finish a subplot. Right before a subplot is supposed to wrap up, the author just has the Mc get distracted and start a new subplot. The last two hundred chapters are especially brutal to read. Author just threw a bunch of shit against the wall and hoped some of it stuck. He should’ve just had a simple, clear storyline. Instead it was too convoluted.