Holy crap a lot of typos or spelling and grammar mistakes! Male fiancée? (It would be fiancé if it were a male) Babie? It’s baby! How hard is that to spell? You need some severe editing or at least re-read and correct the obvious errors yourself before publishing because it looks shoddy and unprofessional - not even decent amateur level. Sorry, can’t get -ast this to read your story.
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April March 13, 2022 5:08 AM
MOSTLY in Chinese novel book the problem is GRAMMAR error. THAT’S WHY I READ ENGLISH BOOK TO IMPROVE MY GRAMMAR . but I got addicted to Chinese novel.
Holy crap a lot of typos or spelling and grammar mistakes! Male fiancée? (It would be fiancé if it were a male) Babie? It’s baby! How hard is that to spell? You need some severe editing or at least re-read and correct the obvious errors yourself before publishing because it looks shoddy and unprofessional - not even decent amateur level. Sorry, can’t get -ast this to read your story.