Urban Conceited Soldier
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Urban Conceited Soldier
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Just finished it. My review of it.

  • ThepoxxedJune 30, 2022 7:00 PM

    First things first. The author seems to have quit this novel before the storylines were even 20% finished.

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  • ThepoxxedJune 30, 2022 7:02 PM

    Secondly. Even though it’s obvious the novel was stopped prematurely.. at least it has a halfassed ending. Most novels that are stopped early on don’t even put up a halfassed ending. They just stop in the middle of a subplot or some shit.

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  • ThepoxxedJune 30, 2022 7:06 PM

    Finally to the novel itself. It has its problems. A lot of problems. But I did get a few days of entertainment out of it, so I can’t be too hypocritical and blindly shit on it. The mc’s daughter is introduced for 3 or 4 chapters and then vanishes. She’s still in the story apparently, because the author maoes references to her, it’s just that she’s no longer active in the novel.

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