You Are My Savior
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You Are My Savior
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Too much description

  • aarushi04agrawalFebruary 10, 2022 12:30 PM

    Starting is good but as you read its as if you are reading a description it’s not like story and it gives of a depressive feeling

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  • cathleenannyuJune 27, 2023 1:54 AM

    The story is confusing. It seems to be different stories that have been put together

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