I liked your story, but the ending is a bet rushed.. Qianqian didn’t even recognized his father yet..why you end liked that? Can you continue writing, please.. Let them go home first, give birth to there kids.. She’s pregnant, right?..
I liked your story, but the ending is a bet rushed.. Qianqian didn’t even recognized his father yet..why you end liked that? Can you continue writing, please.. Let them go home first, give birth to there kids.. She’s pregnant, right?..