The story is good , but the grammar is pathetic , especially the genders are wrongly mentioned. Example "He" is mentioned instead of " she" and vice versa. Similarly "Her" is mentioned instead of "Him". This puts the reader into a lot of confusion. lg...
The story is good , but the grammar is pathetic , especially the genders are wrongly mentioned. Example "He" is mentioned instead of " she" and vice versa. Similarly "Her" is mentioned instead of "Him". This puts the reader into a lot of confusion.lg...

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