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GET AN EDITOR OR LEARN PROPER ENGLISH! Your writing is an absolute abysmal mess! Impossible to read! Improper spelling, agonizing grammar mistakes, et al. Clean it up properly before you publish! Would you really hand this in to a class? If I was your Professor, I would give it an F. If you aren’t a native speaker, it would be better to write it in your native language, then use google translate or something - it will inevitably result in better English than you are able by yourself currently.lg...